25 June, 2009

Gone Swimmin'

Yesterday's Led Zeppelin-centric post was as close to second hand as someone who's experiencing missing time can retell it. Therefore, rather than leave Dave's excellent correction relegated to the Comments Section, I present it here in its entirety using the screenplay formatting that the comment's section prohibits. Take it away, Dave.

The encounter written out, Hollywood style:


INT Hallway, night

DAVE is walking down the hallway past GEORGE'S room on his way to the gym. Standing just inside GEORGE'S room is CHARLIE.

CHARLIE
Where you going?

DAVE
The gym.

At this point DAVE realizes he's forgotten his gym bag and doubles back to the bedroom to retrieve it. He once again is walking down the hallway.

CHARLIE
Are you going to see Led Zeppelin?

DAVE
Uh, no. I'm going to the gym.

CHARLIE
Do they have a pool?

DAVE
Yeah.

CHARLIE
So that's kind of like going to see Led Zeppelin...

DAVE
Sure.
(beat)
CHARLIE
So you're going to see Led Zeppelin.

DAVE
Sure.
(beat)
CHARLIE
Can you sneak us in?

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